Character: What I've been reading so far, Paul hasn't changed yet. He's still embarassed to be around Jacob because he has Down's syndrome. Whenever Jacob gets all of the attention, Paul gets mad and calls him an idiot at times. For example, when Jacob made a mess with his birthday cake, Paul said "gross" and his parents told him not to say it to him. Paul sometimes come home passing Jacob as if he was never borned. I don't like what Paul is doing, but it seems believable because there are people that are embarrassed to be around a family member if they have a disorder or disease. But hating your family member for having a disorder or disease is not believable. Wednesday, January 26, 2011
"Radiance Descending"
Character: What I've been reading so far, Paul hasn't changed yet. He's still embarassed to be around Jacob because he has Down's syndrome. Whenever Jacob gets all of the attention, Paul gets mad and calls him an idiot at times. For example, when Jacob made a mess with his birthday cake, Paul said "gross" and his parents told him not to say it to him. Paul sometimes come home passing Jacob as if he was never borned. I don't like what Paul is doing, but it seems believable because there are people that are embarrassed to be around a family member if they have a disorder or disease. But hating your family member for having a disorder or disease is not believable. 
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Dennis i really believe you got the nature of your character down all in print in your blog. I really enjoy your writing style as for it is very eye popping and very boring style and very ugggghh to read. You need to better your writing skills by attending this workshop in Santa Monica the link is here.... > http://www.santamonica.com/events-calendar/
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